Angel of Death

Hey there Suzuhara!!! I quite liked this, though I thought it was a bit bland. It wouldn't hurt if there was a little imagery here and there and colorful sentences. ...

10/10 Made me laugh! ~Angel

Sabrina All the mortal souls were there for the picking, but she was patient and let herself drift outside. With the tomato flavor still lingering on her lips, Sabrina thought ...

Hey Ky, I liked this chapter. It was really easy to read and you didn't use too many similes and metaphors. There were a couple of errors here and there, ...

Nick The atmosphere engulfed him in its exotic grasp. Music was playing, low and seductive. A few brave souls were swaying. It wasn't like any other club he's ever been ...

Nick Nick placed the piece of heaven in between his lips and took a drag. He loved nights like this. Dark and desolate. The sky was a looming blue, empty ...

Hello there! Hmm, I've been saying this a lot today, but I have a love/don't like relationship with this poem. You have a very good, solidly written beginning but then ...

W-O-W Hello there, dear. I'm Angel, and I will be the reviewer of this poem today. ^_^ This mirrored the intricacies of teenage love really well. And I really could ...

Hello again! I actually liked this one, and your emotions and descriptions were wonderfully executed. As bubble said, I like this the way it is. This could easily be turned ...

Hey! I saw this floatin' around and I thought that I should check it out. Hmm, I have a love/don't like relationship with this poem. I am all for the ...

Hello again!! Connie up there already pointed out the nit-picks, so I'm here to drown you in compliments. I like Dylan, and I can tell she's an awesome character. She ...

I quite like this! I like the fact that you decided to use Dylan ( a boy name) for a girl. (I'm a sucker when it comes to that type ...

What if those fell on someone's head? Ouch! I can kinda feel them, crashing down on me. But anyways, I like the first picture and the last one. It would ...

This was beautiful! All of your sentences flowed and I was very much entertained. Though I feel kinda sick, I thank you for writing such an original piece. I've never ...

Hey Kylan! When I saw this, I just couldn't resist. Okay, Jiggy and Suze already pointed out the little nitpicks. But as for what I thought of it, I am ...